"Were being chased!" yelled Rukka.
Four bad trooper ships charged at them, firing rapidly. Derrik, who was controlling the laser cannons on top, destroyed one. The other three bad trooper ships and the Alpha I exchanged rapid blasts of lasers until only one bad trooper ship was left.
"Look out! They have reinforcements!" Jeff warned. Several ships that looked like they were just three engines stuck together appeared and fired at the Alpha I.
"Wow! TERC ships!" said Rukka.
"What does that stand for?" Derrik asked.
"Three engined remote-controlled," Rukka replied.
The TERC ships were aiming at the guns on top, so they were easy for Derrik to destroy. But every time he blew up a TERC ship up, ten more would take it's place.
"Were do you want to go?" Rukka asked.
"That planet right there," said Garith.
"You mean Sorio?" Rukka asked.
"Yes. No. I've never heard of that before. Just land somewhere!!" Garith shouted.
"There are more bad trooper ships approaching!" yelled Derrik.

That's a great chapter. You are an amazing writer. I noticed a couple of things that need to be fixed. First, you changed your acronym from TECR to TERC. Also change the last line from "There is more bad trooper ships" to "There are more bad trooper ships."
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