The entire god guy army ran out of the bad guy base.
"Kitch," Jeff shouted. "Have any escape pods came out the bad guy base yet?"
"One. I blew it up," Kitch replied.
"Then Barco Drey is dead," said Jeff.
"Well, there is only one thing left do," Garith.
"What's that?" Carathorn asked.
"Have a party!" Garith said.
Monday, November 29, 2010
Saturday, November 20, 2010
Chapter 26
Garith and Alp Medredes slowly circled eachother. Suddenly their lightsabers clashed, making a blur of blue and green light. Alp swung his lightsaber horizontally at Garith. The young Jedi ducked, and Alp's lightsaber swung harmlessly over his head. Garith jumped up and pointed his lightsaber down, attempting to knock Alp's lightsaber from the Sith's hand. Garith fell on top Alp, and both the Jedi and the Sith lost thier lightsabers and began a crazy, rolling, punching fight. Suddenly, Alp Medredes cracked in half! Garith rolled the Sith over saw that Alp had rolled on own still-activated lightsaber. Garith was not hurt, apart from a few bruises and scrapes. The young Jedi looked around at the other Jedis and Siths fighting.
Ahoska, as usual was talking while she was fighting Captain Racun.
"Do really think your a Captain? You are terrible at lightsaber fighting! Take this and this and this and this and this!" Ahoska said.
Beneath his helmet, Racun smiled. He had few tricks still. Suddenly stepping back, he pressed a button on the wall. A pit opened between Racun and Ahoska.
"No wonder your a bad guy! Running from fight like that! You coward!" Ahoska contiued. Suddenly Ahoska threw her lightsaber at Racun! It hit Racun in his heart and he toppled into the pit.
"Humph! I shouldn't have wasted my lightsaber on you!" Ahoska called into the pit.
"Here, use this," Garith said, giving her Alp's lightsaber. Then they charged off to fight droids and bad troopers.
Jeff Fellog's lightsabers had not touched Sluver's since they had begin dueling. Only thier handles had. The Jedi and Sith kept smashing thier lightsaber handles together. Suddenly, Sluver split his lightsabers and swung them at Jeff. The experienced Jedi ducked and stabbed Sluver in the foot. Sluver jumped back into small, deep pool of water. Suddenly, a furry creature jumped down from a ledge after Sluver. A minute later, Chimau emerged from the pool.
"It was getting a little boring at my base so I followed you," she said. "And you won't have to worry about that fish-thing anymore"
Quajin-jin Starfield charged at Darth Lavahead, holding his lightsaber at his side. Lavahead stepped back and two of his bodyguards charged forward. But both guards were cut in half Quajin-jin's blazing lightsaber. Darth Lavahead turned and ran down the hall. Quajin-jin leapt after the fleeing Sith. But Darth Lavahead didn't get very far, because Garith, Jeff, Ahoska and Chimau blocked the hallway!
When Barco Drey saw that all the other Sith were dead he abandoned fighting Carathorn and ran. A laser wall went up behind him.
"Quick, everyone back to your ships! Barco will try get away in an escape pod!" Carathorn ordered. The Jedis and good troopers ran back to the droid room.
Y-wing pilot Kitch Alamalach flew around the bad guy base for millionth time. He had been ordered by Carathorn to pick off any bad guys that tried to escape. Then he spotted Barco's esape pod. Kitch pushed a button, four blue lasers shot toward the escape pod and Barco Drey was gone forever.
Ahoska, as usual was talking while she was fighting Captain Racun.
"Do really think your a Captain? You are terrible at lightsaber fighting! Take this and this and this and this and this!" Ahoska said.
Beneath his helmet, Racun smiled. He had few tricks still. Suddenly stepping back, he pressed a button on the wall. A pit opened between Racun and Ahoska.
"No wonder your a bad guy! Running from fight like that! You coward!" Ahoska contiued. Suddenly Ahoska threw her lightsaber at Racun! It hit Racun in his heart and he toppled into the pit.
"Humph! I shouldn't have wasted my lightsaber on you!" Ahoska called into the pit.
"Here, use this," Garith said, giving her Alp's lightsaber. Then they charged off to fight droids and bad troopers.
Jeff Fellog's lightsabers had not touched Sluver's since they had begin dueling. Only thier handles had. The Jedi and Sith kept smashing thier lightsaber handles together. Suddenly, Sluver split his lightsabers and swung them at Jeff. The experienced Jedi ducked and stabbed Sluver in the foot. Sluver jumped back into small, deep pool of water. Suddenly, a furry creature jumped down from a ledge after Sluver. A minute later, Chimau emerged from the pool.
"It was getting a little boring at my base so I followed you," she said. "And you won't have to worry about that fish-thing anymore"
Quajin-jin Starfield charged at Darth Lavahead, holding his lightsaber at his side. Lavahead stepped back and two of his bodyguards charged forward. But both guards were cut in half Quajin-jin's blazing lightsaber. Darth Lavahead turned and ran down the hall. Quajin-jin leapt after the fleeing Sith. But Darth Lavahead didn't get very far, because Garith, Jeff, Ahoska and Chimau blocked the hallway!
When Barco Drey saw that all the other Sith were dead he abandoned fighting Carathorn and ran. A laser wall went up behind him.
"Quick, everyone back to your ships! Barco will try get away in an escape pod!" Carathorn ordered. The Jedis and good troopers ran back to the droid room.
Y-wing pilot Kitch Alamalach flew around the bad guy base for millionth time. He had been ordered by Carathorn to pick off any bad guys that tried to escape. Then he spotted Barco's esape pod. Kitch pushed a button, four blue lasers shot toward the escape pod and Barco Drey was gone forever.
Monday, November 15, 2010
Chapter 25
Vrrrrrrrrrr-ow Vrrrrrrrrr-ow. The 1,000 ships that made up the good trooper fleet zoomed toward the planet (as Rukka called it) Eleber 1.
"We are approaching Eleber 1!" Rukka yelled into the radio of the main attack ship.
"Look! A pilot droid!" a good trooper yelled.
"A pilot droid? Where?" Carathorn asked.
"There! It is going to Eleber 1!" the good trooper replied.
"It will warn the bad guys! Quick! Attack!!!!!!!!!" Kitch Alamalach yelled.
The entire good trooper fleet charged toward Eleber 1. Bad guy ships shot out of the bad guy base and started to fire at the good guy ships
"There's the tunnel that leads to the droid room!" Derrik yelled. After a few blasts from the main attack ship's cannons, the tunnel was big enough for the main attack ship to get through. The droid room was big enough for the good trooper ships to land, but not big enough for them to maneuver safely. The good troopers jumped out of there ships and begin blasting away at the millions of droids.
"Destroy the droid-making machine!" Ahoska yelled as she chopped down another battle droid.
Suddenly, all the droids shut down. From beside the droid-making machine, Woth beeped triumphantly.
"Good job, Woth!" Garith said.
"Come on, we've got to keep going!" Quajin-jin Starfield said.
The Jedis and the good troopers charged down the hall into a room full of weapons. Suddenly, deadly laser wall lit up and began closing in on the Jedis and good troopers. Ousta grabbed an Electroshield from the wall. Then he pressed the Electroshield and his laser spear against the laser wall. The laser wall deactivated, allowing the Jedi and good troopers through. The next room was full of bad troopers and Siths. The Jedis and Siths activated their lightsabers and began to duel. Garith fought Alp Medredes, Jeff Fellog took on Sluver, Ahoska challenged Captain Racun, Quajin-jin Starfield attacked Darth Lavahead and Carathorn battled Barco Drey. The good troopers fought the bad troopers.
The final battle had begun!
"We are approaching Eleber 1!" Rukka yelled into the radio of the main attack ship.
"Look! A pilot droid!" a good trooper yelled.
"A pilot droid? Where?" Carathorn asked.
"There! It is going to Eleber 1!" the good trooper replied.
"It will warn the bad guys! Quick! Attack!!!!!!!!!" Kitch Alamalach yelled.
The entire good trooper fleet charged toward Eleber 1. Bad guy ships shot out of the bad guy base and started to fire at the good guy ships
"There's the tunnel that leads to the droid room!" Derrik yelled. After a few blasts from the main attack ship's cannons, the tunnel was big enough for the main attack ship to get through. The droid room was big enough for the good trooper ships to land, but not big enough for them to maneuver safely. The good troopers jumped out of there ships and begin blasting away at the millions of droids.
"Destroy the droid-making machine!" Ahoska yelled as she chopped down another battle droid.
Suddenly, all the droids shut down. From beside the droid-making machine, Woth beeped triumphantly.
"Good job, Woth!" Garith said.
"Come on, we've got to keep going!" Quajin-jin Starfield said.
The Jedis and the good troopers charged down the hall into a room full of weapons. Suddenly, deadly laser wall lit up and began closing in on the Jedis and good troopers. Ousta grabbed an Electroshield from the wall. Then he pressed the Electroshield and his laser spear against the laser wall. The laser wall deactivated, allowing the Jedi and good troopers through. The next room was full of bad troopers and Siths. The Jedis and Siths activated their lightsabers and began to duel. Garith fought Alp Medredes, Jeff Fellog took on Sluver, Ahoska challenged Captain Racun, Quajin-jin Starfield attacked Darth Lavahead and Carathorn battled Barco Drey. The good troopers fought the bad troopers.
The final battle had begun!
Saturday, November 13, 2010
Chapter 24
Commander Ben had let Ousta fly the X-wing while they were in space, then took over when Ousta had almost smashed into a giant astroid. Now they were back at the good guys base, and Carathorn was explaining his next plan.
"We will launch a full-scale attack on the bad guy base first thing tomorrow morning. Barco Drey won't be expecting us to attack so soon. Commander Ben, Rukka and Derrik will take the main attack ship. Everybody else will go in their own starfighters. We will land in the bad trooper ship station," Carathorn said.
"The bad trooper ship station is not big enough to hold all the good trooper ships, sir," said Jeff.
The good troopers outnumbered the bad troopers greatly, but since the droid-making machine could make so many droids on only a few gallons of gas, there were more droids than bad troopers.
"I'll have to think about that," Carathorn said.
"Sir, we could fit all our ships in the droid room. There is a tunnel big enough to fit all the good trooper ships, one at a time, that leads to the droid room. And from there we could easily destroy the droid-making machine," Rukka suggested.
"Great idea, Rukka," Carathorn said. "Everyone prepare their ships than get some rest. We have a big day tomorrow."
Garith walked over to his wedge fighter and begin checking it. Suddenly, a green and brown camera droid buzzed out of the co-pilot's seat. Garith sliced through it with his lightsaber.
"That's one of our droids," said a voice.
Garith turned and was surprised to see a laser trooper standing next to him.
"Why was your droid taking pictures of my ship?" Garith demanded.
"I did not put it there.......... What's this?" the laser trooper said. He picked up a small device from destroyed droid. "It's been reprogrammed. But by tomorrow morning I'll know who did it."
From beside Garith, Woth beeped anxiously.
"We will launch a full-scale attack on the bad guy base first thing tomorrow morning. Barco Drey won't be expecting us to attack so soon. Commander Ben, Rukka and Derrik will take the main attack ship. Everybody else will go in their own starfighters. We will land in the bad trooper ship station," Carathorn said.
"The bad trooper ship station is not big enough to hold all the good trooper ships, sir," said Jeff.
The good troopers outnumbered the bad troopers greatly, but since the droid-making machine could make so many droids on only a few gallons of gas, there were more droids than bad troopers.
"I'll have to think about that," Carathorn said.
"Sir, we could fit all our ships in the droid room. There is a tunnel big enough to fit all the good trooper ships, one at a time, that leads to the droid room. And from there we could easily destroy the droid-making machine," Rukka suggested.
"Great idea, Rukka," Carathorn said. "Everyone prepare their ships than get some rest. We have a big day tomorrow."
Garith walked over to his wedge fighter and begin checking it. Suddenly, a green and brown camera droid buzzed out of the co-pilot's seat. Garith sliced through it with his lightsaber.
"That's one of our droids," said a voice.
Garith turned and was surprised to see a laser trooper standing next to him.
"Why was your droid taking pictures of my ship?" Garith demanded.
"I did not put it there.......... What's this?" the laser trooper said. He picked up a small device from destroyed droid. "It's been reprogrammed. But by tomorrow morning I'll know who did it."
From beside Garith, Woth beeped anxiously.
Wednesday, November 10, 2010
Chapter 23
"I've found the signs of life, so now I've got to get out of here!" Commander Ben thought as he dodged another laser and fired back at the charging battle droids.
Suddenly a huge shape towered over the other droids. It was a Spider droid! Ben decided that the time for fighting was over and ran for his ship. He sat down, pushed the gas pedal and screeeeeeech! Nothing happened. Just then, the mysterious laser spear thrower jumped from a sand dune and grabbed his laser spear from the fallen super battle droid and jumped on the Spider droid. Commander Ben only saw the mysterious laser spear thrower's back. He wore a brown hood and cape. The mysterious laser spear thrower thrust his spear into the spider droid's head, then he pulled it out. He kept on thrusting his spear and pulling it out and thrusting again until the Spider droid fell to pieces, smashing many battle droids with it. The remaining droids ran away. The mysterious laser spear thrower turned, and Ben saw that he had a wrinkled face and big eyes.
"Nemino Ousta," said the mysterious laser spear thrower.
"Can you speak English?" Ben asked.
" Yes. I said 'My name is Ousta'," said said the mysterious laser spear thrower.
"I am Commander Ben and my ship won't start. Can you fix it?" Ben said.
"I'll try. But I've never seen one of these before," said Ousta.
Ousta crawled under the pilot seat and got to work. Bang. Bong. Bong. Bang. Bangabongabongabang.
"It's fixed," said Ousta.
Suddenly a huge shape towered over the other droids. It was a Spider droid! Ben decided that the time for fighting was over and ran for his ship. He sat down, pushed the gas pedal and screeeeeeech! Nothing happened. Just then, the mysterious laser spear thrower jumped from a sand dune and grabbed his laser spear from the fallen super battle droid and jumped on the Spider droid. Commander Ben only saw the mysterious laser spear thrower's back. He wore a brown hood and cape. The mysterious laser spear thrower thrust his spear into the spider droid's head, then he pulled it out. He kept on thrusting his spear and pulling it out and thrusting again until the Spider droid fell to pieces, smashing many battle droids with it. The remaining droids ran away. The mysterious laser spear thrower turned, and Ben saw that he had a wrinkled face and big eyes.
"Nemino Ousta," said the mysterious laser spear thrower.
"Can you speak English?" Ben asked.
" Yes. I said 'My name is Ousta'," said said the mysterious laser spear thrower.
"I am Commander Ben and my ship won't start. Can you fix it?" Ben said.
"I'll try. But I've never seen one of these before," said Ousta.
Ousta crawled under the pilot seat and got to work. Bang. Bong. Bong. Bang. Bangabongabongabang.
"It's fixed," said Ousta.
Chapter 22
"You let the Destroyer be stolen!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Barco Drey roared."RAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRR!"
"Um..... we built you a new ship," said Sluver. He had just reported the news to Barco Drey, and Barco was not happy.
"What new ship?" asked Barco.
"I'll show you," said Sluver, hoping his invention would satisfy Barco.
Sluver's new ship was a wedge fighter with several TERC ship (called engine droids by bad guys) engines strapped onto it. Security droids and bad troopers marched around it. Just then, Darth Lavahead, flanked by two of his personal bodyguards, entered the room. Lavahead's bodyguards wore black uniforms. Their helmets were like stormtrooper's, only black. Two long pipes connected to the bottom of their helmets and went back into a jetpack.
"We're out of gas for droid-making machine , sir," Darth Lavahead said.
"Then tell Alp Medredes to order some more," Barco Drey said.
"I already did," said Lavahead." But the droid factory wants $500.00!"
"This should be enough," said Barco, taking a large chunk of gold from a shelf.
"Um..... we built you a new ship," said Sluver. He had just reported the news to Barco Drey, and Barco was not happy.
"What new ship?" asked Barco.
"I'll show you," said Sluver, hoping his invention would satisfy Barco.
Sluver's new ship was a wedge fighter with several TERC ship (called engine droids by bad guys) engines strapped onto it. Security droids and bad troopers marched around it. Just then, Darth Lavahead, flanked by two of his personal bodyguards, entered the room. Lavahead's bodyguards wore black uniforms. Their helmets were like stormtrooper's, only black. Two long pipes connected to the bottom of their helmets and went back into a jetpack.
"We're out of gas for droid-making machine , sir," Darth Lavahead said.
"Then tell Alp Medredes to order some more," Barco Drey said.
"I already did," said Lavahead." But the droid factory wants $500.00!"
"This should be enough," said Barco, taking a large chunk of gold from a shelf.
Tuesday, November 9, 2010
Chapter 21
Commander Ben landed his X-wing and jumped out. In his belt were four items: two laser pistols, a rope pistol that shot out climbing ropes, and a pair of binoculars. Ben took out the binoculars and scanned the horizon. Nothing but sand and a big rock in front of him for miles.
"Maybe I should land somewhere else," thought the experienced commander.
Suddenly a Super battle droid jumped from behind the rock and fired at Commander Ben! Ben dodged and instantly grabbed the two laser pistols from his belt and returned the droids fire. Then three things happened a once. One: more battle droids suddenly appeared. Two: Ben whirled and and fired and fired and fired and fired some more at the droids. Three: a laser spear shot through the Super battle droid and destroyed it. Ben looked to see who had thrown the laser spear. That was all the battle droids needed.
Far above Commander Ben the droid ship exploded.
"Mission complete. Let's head back to base," said Carathorn.
"Wait! There is a large ship approaching!" Kitch Alamalach yelled.
The large ship was the Alpha I.
"Now it's our turn to have reinforcements," Starl said. The good guy ships clashed with bad trooper ships and TERC ships.
"Maybe I should land somewhere else," thought the experienced commander.
Suddenly a Super battle droid jumped from behind the rock and fired at Commander Ben! Ben dodged and instantly grabbed the two laser pistols from his belt and returned the droids fire. Then three things happened a once. One: more battle droids suddenly appeared. Two: Ben whirled and and fired and fired and fired and fired some more at the droids. Three: a laser spear shot through the Super battle droid and destroyed it. Ben looked to see who had thrown the laser spear. That was all the battle droids needed.
Far above Commander Ben the droid ship exploded.
"Mission complete. Let's head back to base," said Carathorn.
"Wait! There is a large ship approaching!" Kitch Alamalach yelled.
The large ship was the Alpha I.
"Now it's our turn to have reinforcements," Starl said. The good guy ships clashed with bad trooper ships and TERC ships.
Chapter 20
"Were being chased!" yelled Rukka.
Four bad trooper ships charged at them, firing rapidly. Derrik, who was controlling the laser cannons on top, destroyed one. The other three bad trooper ships and the Alpha I exchanged rapid blasts of lasers until only one bad trooper ship was left.
"Look out! They have reinforcements!" Jeff warned. Several ships that looked like they were just three engines stuck together appeared and fired at the Alpha I.
"Wow! TERC ships!" said Rukka.
"What does that stand for?" Derrik asked.
"Three engined remote-controlled," Rukka replied.
The TERC ships were aiming at the guns on top, so they were easy for Derrik to destroy. But every time he blew up a TERC ship up, ten more would take it's place.
"Were do you want to go?" Rukka asked.
"That planet right there," said Garith.
"You mean Sorio?" Rukka asked.
"Yes. No. I've never heard of that before. Just land somewhere!!" Garith shouted.
"There are more bad trooper ships approaching!" yelled Derrik.
Four bad trooper ships charged at them, firing rapidly. Derrik, who was controlling the laser cannons on top, destroyed one. The other three bad trooper ships and the Alpha I exchanged rapid blasts of lasers until only one bad trooper ship was left.
"Look out! They have reinforcements!" Jeff warned. Several ships that looked like they were just three engines stuck together appeared and fired at the Alpha I.
"Wow! TERC ships!" said Rukka.
"What does that stand for?" Derrik asked.
"Three engined remote-controlled," Rukka replied.
The TERC ships were aiming at the guns on top, so they were easy for Derrik to destroy. But every time he blew up a TERC ship up, ten more would take it's place.
"Were do you want to go?" Rukka asked.
"That planet right there," said Garith.
"You mean Sorio?" Rukka asked.
"Yes. No. I've never heard of that before. Just land somewhere!!" Garith shouted.
"There are more bad trooper ships approaching!" yelled Derrik.
Monday, November 8, 2010
Chapter 19
About 25 Y-wings, Xwings, Wedge fighters and Carathorn's starfighter blasted of the good guys base to inspect the ships. Commender Ben flew an X-wing. He intended to land on a nearby planet
to investigate the 'signs of life' that had been picked up the droid ship.
"My ship's sensors are not picking anything up........Wait! I see something!" said a voice through Carathorn's radio. Carathorn recognized the voice to belong to Kitch Alamalach, a Y-wing pilot.
Soon everyone could the big Droid ship. It was blue and white. Gun that were being controlled by battle droids covered the top. Then the droid ship spotted them and opened fire. Good guy ships fired a heavy stream of lasers at the droid ship. One of the guns on top of the droid ship exploded. This caused the other droids double the speed. The good guy ships did the same.
The Commander of the droid ship was furious! First that dumb pilot droid had flown around so much that the ship had run out of fuel, then they been captured by this foresty planet's orbit. And that was just when they had picked up signs of life on a supposed to be uninhabited planet!
"Commander, we're under attack," said a red-chested security droid.
"I can see that!!!!" the Commander yelled. "Just tell those droids to destroy every enemy out there!"
More guns exploded. Carathorn knew that the droid ship would soon be destroyed. So far, only a single good guy ship had been lost. And that was because the reprogrammed droid driving had become confused at the sight of the battle droids firing at him.
"Commander Ben, you can began your investigation now. We'll be fine without you," said Carathorn into his radio.
to investigate the 'signs of life' that had been picked up the droid ship.
"My ship's sensors are not picking anything up........Wait! I see something!" said a voice through Carathorn's radio. Carathorn recognized the voice to belong to Kitch Alamalach, a Y-wing pilot.
Soon everyone could the big Droid ship. It was blue and white. Gun that were being controlled by battle droids covered the top. Then the droid ship spotted them and opened fire. Good guy ships fired a heavy stream of lasers at the droid ship. One of the guns on top of the droid ship exploded. This caused the other droids double the speed. The good guy ships did the same.
The Commander of the droid ship was furious! First that dumb pilot droid had flown around so much that the ship had run out of fuel, then they been captured by this foresty planet's orbit. And that was just when they had picked up signs of life on a supposed to be uninhabited planet!
"Commander, we're under attack," said a red-chested security droid.
"I can see that!!!!" the Commander yelled. "Just tell those droids to destroy every enemy out there!"
More guns exploded. Carathorn knew that the droid ship would soon be destroyed. So far, only a single good guy ship had been lost. And that was because the reprogrammed droid driving had become confused at the sight of the battle droids firing at him.
"Commander Ben, you can began your investigation now. We'll be fine without you," said Carathorn into his radio.
Friday, November 5, 2010
Chapter 18
Following them was a droid nobody had ever seen before! It had four wheels and eight arms. It's head was almost bigger than It's body!
"Team88, we think there is a spy on the lose. One of our cameras was destroyed and several bad troopers and droids were found dead," Sluver said.
"So were team88," Jeff thought.
"And we have finished our multi-armed half astromech and half super battle droid," Alp Medredes said.
One of the droids arms went inside it's body and came out holding a gun.
"Go inspect the Destroyer. I think whoever the spy is must be here to steal it," Sluver ordered.
Jeff, Garith, Starl, Woth, Rukka and Derrik ran quickly across the light bridge.
"That's the Alpha I all right," Rukka said when they reached the Alpha I.
The Alpha I was sphere-shaped with four legs holding it up. Derrik pressed a button on a remote sticking down from the middle of the ship. The remote went up, a ramp came down a door opened on the Alpha I's side. They all climbed up the ramp and into the ship. Rukka and Derrik took down a couple green uniforms from a closet and put them on, then sat down in the two pilot seats.
"Prepare for takeoff!" Derrik shouted. The two pilots flipped a switches and pressed a few buttons. The Alpha I's legs came in and the ship blasted off the planet.
...
At the good guy base....
"Carathorn, I think our computer in malfunctioning!" Ahoska said.
"Why do you think that?" Carathorn asked.
"It's saying weird things. Like right here it says: 'a droid ship has picked up signs of life on a nearby planet' and 'an unidentified ship has just been captured by this planet's gravity'," said Ahoska.
"I'd like to check those ships out. Get a squad of Y-wings, X-wings and Wedge fighters (those were like Garith's ship) ready. I'll prepare my own ship," said Carathorn.
"Team88, we think there is a spy on the lose. One of our cameras was destroyed and several bad troopers and droids were found dead," Sluver said.
"So were team88," Jeff thought.
"And we have finished our multi-armed half astromech and half super battle droid," Alp Medredes said.
One of the droids arms went inside it's body and came out holding a gun.
"Go inspect the Destroyer. I think whoever the spy is must be here to steal it," Sluver ordered.
Jeff, Garith, Starl, Woth, Rukka and Derrik ran quickly across the light bridge.
"That's the Alpha I all right," Rukka said when they reached the Alpha I.
The Alpha I was sphere-shaped with four legs holding it up. Derrik pressed a button on a remote sticking down from the middle of the ship. The remote went up, a ramp came down a door opened on the Alpha I's side. They all climbed up the ramp and into the ship. Rukka and Derrik took down a couple green uniforms from a closet and put them on, then sat down in the two pilot seats.
"Prepare for takeoff!" Derrik shouted. The two pilots flipped a switches and pressed a few buttons. The Alpha I's legs came in and the ship blasted off the planet.
...
At the good guy base....
"Carathorn, I think our computer in malfunctioning!" Ahoska said.
"Why do you think that?" Carathorn asked.
"It's saying weird things. Like right here it says: 'a droid ship has picked up signs of life on a nearby planet' and 'an unidentified ship has just been captured by this planet's gravity'," said Ahoska.
"I'd like to check those ships out. Get a squad of Y-wings, X-wings and Wedge fighters (those were like Garith's ship) ready. I'll prepare my own ship," said Carathorn.
Tuesday, November 2, 2010
Chapter 17
"What are you..." said a bad trooper When Garith, Jeff, Starl, and Woth got out of their ships. But before it could finish, Starl blasted him.
"This way!" Garith said.
They came into a long hallway with doors covering both the walls. Jeff tried to open the first door, then cut the lock with his lightsabers.
"This way," said Jeff.
They came into a small room. Bad trooper suits hung on one wall. There was computer in on corner. A large screen covered most of another wall. Two bad troopers were in the center of the room. One of them whirled and fired at Garith. Garith used his lightsaber to block the bullet.
"Wait a minute, you're not a real bad trooper, are you?" the other trooper said.
"Um....no," Garith said.
"Well I'm not either. I'm Rukka and this is Derrik Folstering," the trooper said, taking off his helmet.
"I'm Jeff Fellog, this Starl Frinloo, this is Garith and this is Woth. Why are you here?" Jeff said, also taking off his helmet.
"We came to get our ship, the Alpha I. It was stolen by some of those bad troopers," Rukka said.
Suddenly, a droideka burst into the room! Jeff and Garith whipped out their lightsabers and blocked the droideka's lasers. Finally, the droideka exploded. Derrik opened a door, revealing a dark, deep canyon. He took out binoculars from his belt and scanned the canyon.
"There is a door marked Destroyer over there. I think that's what the bad troopers call the Alpha I! Can Woth activate a light bridge across this canyon?" Derrik said.
Woth went over to the computer and worked on the code for a little bit, then suddenly a light bridge activated across the canyon! But before anyone could move, the door marked Destroyer flung open and two figures stepped onto the light bridge. One seemed to be half fish and half man. That was Sluver. The other looked a lot like Count Dooko. That was Alp Medredes.
"This way!" Garith said.
They came into a long hallway with doors covering both the walls. Jeff tried to open the first door, then cut the lock with his lightsabers.
"This way," said Jeff.
They came into a small room. Bad trooper suits hung on one wall. There was computer in on corner. A large screen covered most of another wall. Two bad troopers were in the center of the room. One of them whirled and fired at Garith. Garith used his lightsaber to block the bullet.
"Wait a minute, you're not a real bad trooper, are you?" the other trooper said.
"Um....no," Garith said.
"Well I'm not either. I'm Rukka and this is Derrik Folstering," the trooper said, taking off his helmet.
"I'm Jeff Fellog, this Starl Frinloo, this is Garith and this is Woth. Why are you here?" Jeff said, also taking off his helmet.
"We came to get our ship, the Alpha I. It was stolen by some of those bad troopers," Rukka said.
Suddenly, a droideka burst into the room! Jeff and Garith whipped out their lightsabers and blocked the droideka's lasers. Finally, the droideka exploded. Derrik opened a door, revealing a dark, deep canyon. He took out binoculars from his belt and scanned the canyon.
"There is a door marked Destroyer over there. I think that's what the bad troopers call the Alpha I! Can Woth activate a light bridge across this canyon?" Derrik said.
Woth went over to the computer and worked on the code for a little bit, then suddenly a light bridge activated across the canyon! But before anyone could move, the door marked Destroyer flung open and two figures stepped onto the light bridge. One seemed to be half fish and half man. That was Sluver. The other looked a lot like Count Dooko. That was Alp Medredes.
Tuesday, October 26, 2010
Chapter 16
It had been a month since Barco Drey attacked the good guy base and the good guys had not seen him or any other bad guys. But Carathorn not think that Barco had given up on the war.
"He's probably just building more droids so he can attack us again," Carathorn had told the other Jedi.
One day the Jedis called a meeting to decide what to next. Quajin-jin thought that they could use one of Woth's reprogramed droids to find the location of the bad guy's base.
"The droids are turned off and are being kept in a special room," Carathorn said.
They went to the room and turned on one of the battle droids. The droid ran and smashed itself into the wall.
"That won't work," Garith said.
Woth said something in robot language. But everybody understood him.
"He said that he knows where the bad guys base is!" Garith said even though everyone understood Woth.
Woth went to a captured bad guy ship and climbed in. Garith, Jeff, and Starl Frinloo climbed into other bad guy ships.
"We won't attack directly, just spy on Barco Drey," Jeff said.
...
Four bad guy ships zoomed through space. Woth beeped into the radio to tell that they were approaching the bad guy base.
"Does everyone have their disguises on?" asked Garith.
"Yes," said Jeff and Starl.
"EEEEEEEEEEEEE!" said Woth.
"I know that," replied Garith.
"Be careful. We've got company!" said Starl.
A team of bad trooper ships zoomed out to meet them.
"What your number?" demanded the team leader.
"Uh.....TK-14-7," said Jeff.
That satisfied the team leader. The entire team went back to their base. Jeff, Garith, Woth, and Starl followed them.
"He's probably just building more droids so he can attack us again," Carathorn had told the other Jedi.
One day the Jedis called a meeting to decide what to next. Quajin-jin thought that they could use one of Woth's reprogramed droids to find the location of the bad guy's base.
"The droids are turned off and are being kept in a special room," Carathorn said.
They went to the room and turned on one of the battle droids. The droid ran and smashed itself into the wall.
"That won't work," Garith said.
Woth said something in robot language. But everybody understood him.
"He said that he knows where the bad guys base is!" Garith said even though everyone understood Woth.
Woth went to a captured bad guy ship and climbed in. Garith, Jeff, and Starl Frinloo climbed into other bad guy ships.
"We won't attack directly, just spy on Barco Drey," Jeff said.
...
Four bad guy ships zoomed through space. Woth beeped into the radio to tell that they were approaching the bad guy base.
"Does everyone have their disguises on?" asked Garith.
"Yes," said Jeff and Starl.
"EEEEEEEEEEEEE!" said Woth.
"I know that," replied Garith.
"Be careful. We've got company!" said Starl.
A team of bad trooper ships zoomed out to meet them.
"What your number?" demanded the team leader.
"Uh.....TK-14-7," said Jeff.
That satisfied the team leader. The entire team went back to their base. Jeff, Garith, Woth, and Starl followed them.
Friday, October 15, 2010
Chapter 15
The lava monsters attacked from all directions! Carathorn was taken entirely by suprise. One of the lava monsters knocked Carathorn's lightsaber from him. Suddenly a laser spear shot through the air and hit a lava monster. The other lava monsters begin to back away from Carathorn. Then a Jedi Starfighter zoomed down and fired rapidly at the lava monsters. All the lava monsters ran back to their holes. A person jumped out of the starfighter, who Carathorn recognized as the friend he was looking for!
"Quajin-jin Starfield! What are you doing here?" Carathorn said.
"What are you doing here?" Quajin-jin replied.
"We'll talk about that later. Right now we have to hurry back to our base because Barco Drey is attacking it!" Carathorn said.
"Then let's get going!" Quajin-jin said.
The two Jedis jumped into the Starfighter and sped off.
...
As soon as Barco Drey's army landed good troopers came charging through the trees, attacking the bad troopers by surprise. Everyone was surprised when the door to a bad guy ship opened and instead of a bunch of bad troopers, Woth came out! Barco Drey had also brought a lot of droids, including huge frog droids and deadly droidekas. When ever a droid was destroyed, Woth hurried over and reprogramed them. This kept the other droids confused. The droidekas moved in front and bad troopers fired fron behind them. The good troopers bullets could not break through the droidekas shields. Suddenly a Jedi starfighter zoomed in and blast apart the nearest droideka. Carathorn and Quajin-jin jumped out and attacked the droidekas. After the attack there were only a few droids and bad troopers left. The Jedi charged and defeated the last droids and bad troopers. The Sith-including Barco Drey's new general, Darth Lavahead-jumped back into their ships and sped off.
"Quajin-jin Starfield! What are you doing here?" Carathorn said.
"What are you doing here?" Quajin-jin replied.
"We'll talk about that later. Right now we have to hurry back to our base because Barco Drey is attacking it!" Carathorn said.
"Then let's get going!" Quajin-jin said.
The two Jedis jumped into the Starfighter and sped off.
...
As soon as Barco Drey's army landed good troopers came charging through the trees, attacking the bad troopers by surprise. Everyone was surprised when the door to a bad guy ship opened and instead of a bunch of bad troopers, Woth came out! Barco Drey had also brought a lot of droids, including huge frog droids and deadly droidekas. When ever a droid was destroyed, Woth hurried over and reprogramed them. This kept the other droids confused. The droidekas moved in front and bad troopers fired fron behind them. The good troopers bullets could not break through the droidekas shields. Suddenly a Jedi starfighter zoomed in and blast apart the nearest droideka. Carathorn and Quajin-jin jumped out and attacked the droidekas. After the attack there were only a few droids and bad troopers left. The Jedi charged and defeated the last droids and bad troopers. The Sith-including Barco Drey's new general, Darth Lavahead-jumped back into their ships and sped off.
Tuesday, October 5, 2010
Chapter 14
"We'd better start preparing for an attack, because now the bad guys know were our base is located and I think that Barco Drey will send his full forces out to attack us," Chimau said after Carathorn had finished talking.
"Then I'll go and a get friend of mine to help us" Carathorn said. He jumped into his Starfighter and took off.
"I wonder who Carathorn's friend is," Garith said.
"We'll soon find out," Said Jeff.
...
Barco Drey sped toward the forest as fast as his ship would go. Hundreds of bad guy ships surrounded him. Suddenly Carathorn's Starfighter ran right into the bad guys! Carathorn swerved and landed on the planet below. Unluckily the planet was full canyons and volcanoes and lava monsters and stuff like that. Carathorn's ship fell into a canyon, but Carathorn stabbed his lightsaber into the side and climbed up onto a stone bridge and walked into a giant cave-one full of lava monsters!
...
Jeff had taken command at the good guy base. Chimau and Starl Frinloo moved the laser cannon in front of the good guy base. Ahoska estimated where most of the bad guy ships and placed a squad of good troopers there. Garith disguised his ship so it looked like a pile of dead leaves and got ready to burst out and take the enemy ships by surprise. Now the only thing missing was Carathorn.
"Then I'll go and a get friend of mine to help us" Carathorn said. He jumped into his Starfighter and took off.
"I wonder who Carathorn's friend is," Garith said.
"We'll soon find out," Said Jeff.
...
Barco Drey sped toward the forest as fast as his ship would go. Hundreds of bad guy ships surrounded him. Suddenly Carathorn's Starfighter ran right into the bad guys! Carathorn swerved and landed on the planet below. Unluckily the planet was full canyons and volcanoes and lava monsters and stuff like that. Carathorn's ship fell into a canyon, but Carathorn stabbed his lightsaber into the side and climbed up onto a stone bridge and walked into a giant cave-one full of lava monsters!
...
Jeff had taken command at the good guy base. Chimau and Starl Frinloo moved the laser cannon in front of the good guy base. Ahoska estimated where most of the bad guy ships and placed a squad of good troopers there. Garith disguised his ship so it looked like a pile of dead leaves and got ready to burst out and take the enemy ships by surprise. Now the only thing missing was Carathorn.
Sunday, October 3, 2010
Chapter 13
The battle was short. All of the bad troopers fled back to their ships as soon as the it had begun.
"How did the attack go?" Chimau asked.
"Fairly well. We did have a few surprises but we still destroyed the supreme base," Carathorn said.
"What about Barco Drey?" Chimau asked.
"He sped off in and escape pod and we decided not to chase him. How about we rest and I'll tell you the full story," Carathorn said.
At the not-quite-finished new bad guy base.......
Sluver walked into Barco Drey's room.
"Have the troopers I sent to the forest returned?" Barco asked.
"Yes. And they say that they know where the good guy base is." Sluver said.
"Then prepare to attack it immediately! Call every Sith in all of Trandon! After we attack there will not be a single good guy left alive! And I will win! Haha!"
Sluver rushed out the room.
"How did the attack go?" Chimau asked.
"Fairly well. We did have a few surprises but we still destroyed the supreme base," Carathorn said.
"What about Barco Drey?" Chimau asked.
"He sped off in and escape pod and we decided not to chase him. How about we rest and I'll tell you the full story," Carathorn said.
At the not-quite-finished new bad guy base.......
Sluver walked into Barco Drey's room.
"Have the troopers I sent to the forest returned?" Barco asked.
"Yes. And they say that they know where the good guy base is." Sluver said.
"Then prepare to attack it immediately! Call every Sith in all of Trandon! After we attack there will not be a single good guy left alive! And I will win! Haha!"
Sluver rushed out the room.
Monday, September 20, 2010
Chapter 12
Garith fell on top of a good trooper ship and climbed in using the emergency escape hatch. The good troopers inside made the ship dive and catch another good trooper. Other good and bad ships zoomed around catching falling people. Once the bad guy ships had caught everyone they sped off quickly before the good troopers could pursue them.
"What happened?" Garith asked the good trooper.
"We just kept shooting at the supreme base until it finally exploded," the trooper replied.
The main attack ship pulled up beside them.
"Head back to our base immediately! The bad guys have dropped a giant robot in the forest! We have to beat Barco Drey back!" Carathorn yelled through a window.
The good trooper ships sped off at top speed, not noticing that they had left someone behind.
When they reached the forested planet that the good guy base was on Garith saw the giant robot. He gasped. The robot was absolutely giant giantly giant! Suddenly the robot flew through the air, narrowly missing the ship Garith was on!
"Thats Chimau blasting it away with.....................something," Garith thought to himself.
The good trooper landed the ship. Garith jumped out. Bad troopers were everywhere! The main attack ship and several other good trooper ships landed beside Garith. Good troopers poured into the battle. Suddenly a huge bullet shot though the bad troopers! A voice yelled over the noise of battle:
"Good guys! Get behind this cannon thing or else you'll get blasted to bits!"
Garith looked to where the voice was coming from. A laser trooper was yelling at them. Next to him was a laser cannon mounted on a stone wall. Laser troopers on the wall were firing rapidly at the bad troopers.
"Get behind the wall!" the laser trooper shouted again.
The team of Jedis and the good troopers moved behind the wall.
"I'm Starl Frinloo" the laser trooper said.
"Do you know where Chimau is?" Carathorn asked.
"She's in the tank that just drove right into the battle and blew apart all the bad troopers" Starl said.
"Huh? What tank?" Carathorn said, turning to where the bad troopers had been. A purple tank was in the middle of the battle. Moments later the bad troopers directed all their fire power on the lone tank. It was able to resist the barrage of bullets and lasers, but its solid exterior was slowly wearing down.
"She needs help," Carathorn shouted.
Starl aimed the cannon at the bad tropers and began firing rapidly but more bad troopers came racing into battle and the cannon was running out of ammo. Just then a faint rumble echoed in the distance. Carathorn and the others looked toward the sky and saw the minute sillouhette of a man and a jet pack racing toward the battle. Commander Ben, the lone good guy who had been left at the bad guy base, had found a way back home and just in time. With his jet pack at full speed, he aimed himself toward a mass of bad troopers. Using the element of surprise, he whipped out his guns, pulled the triggers and let a thousand shots ring out. But even more bad troopers were arriving and Ben couldn't keep this up for long. Then Carathorn led a charge into battle to help the lone commander. The tank's door opened and Chimau and several laser troopers charged into the battle.
"What happened?" Garith asked the good trooper.
"We just kept shooting at the supreme base until it finally exploded," the trooper replied.
The main attack ship pulled up beside them.
"Head back to our base immediately! The bad guys have dropped a giant robot in the forest! We have to beat Barco Drey back!" Carathorn yelled through a window.
The good trooper ships sped off at top speed, not noticing that they had left someone behind.
When they reached the forested planet that the good guy base was on Garith saw the giant robot. He gasped. The robot was absolutely giant giantly giant! Suddenly the robot flew through the air, narrowly missing the ship Garith was on!
"Thats Chimau blasting it away with.....................something," Garith thought to himself.
The good trooper landed the ship. Garith jumped out. Bad troopers were everywhere! The main attack ship and several other good trooper ships landed beside Garith. Good troopers poured into the battle. Suddenly a huge bullet shot though the bad troopers! A voice yelled over the noise of battle:
"Good guys! Get behind this cannon thing or else you'll get blasted to bits!"
Garith looked to where the voice was coming from. A laser trooper was yelling at them. Next to him was a laser cannon mounted on a stone wall. Laser troopers on the wall were firing rapidly at the bad troopers.
"Get behind the wall!" the laser trooper shouted again.
The team of Jedis and the good troopers moved behind the wall.
"I'm Starl Frinloo" the laser trooper said.
"Do you know where Chimau is?" Carathorn asked.
"She's in the tank that just drove right into the battle and blew apart all the bad troopers" Starl said.
"Huh? What tank?" Carathorn said, turning to where the bad troopers had been. A purple tank was in the middle of the battle. Moments later the bad troopers directed all their fire power on the lone tank. It was able to resist the barrage of bullets and lasers, but its solid exterior was slowly wearing down.
"She needs help," Carathorn shouted.
Starl aimed the cannon at the bad tropers and began firing rapidly but more bad troopers came racing into battle and the cannon was running out of ammo. Just then a faint rumble echoed in the distance. Carathorn and the others looked toward the sky and saw the minute sillouhette of a man and a jet pack racing toward the battle. Commander Ben, the lone good guy who had been left at the bad guy base, had found a way back home and just in time. With his jet pack at full speed, he aimed himself toward a mass of bad troopers. Using the element of surprise, he whipped out his guns, pulled the triggers and let a thousand shots ring out. But even more bad troopers were arriving and Ben couldn't keep this up for long. Then Carathorn led a charge into battle to help the lone commander. The tank's door opened and Chimau and several laser troopers charged into the battle.
Sunday, September 12, 2010
Chapter 11
"I found this droid and followed him until I came to this room. As I followed him I realized that this was an unusually smart droid. I started to build this tank and then you busted in," Arou said. "This droid showed me some of the bad guys plans. They are planning to drop a giant robot into the forest..."
He was suddenly interrupted by a noise in the passageway. Arou turned at the sound of an approaching battle. Bad troopers charged into the front ranks of good troopers and were met by a heavy bullet shower. Garith, Jeff, Ahoska and Carathorn leaped into the enemy ranks and soon had bad troopers flying in every direction. Suddenly a huge tank came roaring into the battle, scattering bad troopers like golf balls. Arou and Woth jumped out of the tank. Just then, the tank exploded! Carathorn looked down the passage. The entire Sith crew-Barco Drey, Sluver, Alp Medredes and Captain Racun-blocked the only exit. Carathorn, Jeff, Ahoska and Garith whipped out their lightsabers and began to duel. But before much happened the entire supreme base exploded!
He was suddenly interrupted by a noise in the passageway. Arou turned at the sound of an approaching battle. Bad troopers charged into the front ranks of good troopers and were met by a heavy bullet shower. Garith, Jeff, Ahoska and Carathorn leaped into the enemy ranks and soon had bad troopers flying in every direction. Suddenly a huge tank came roaring into the battle, scattering bad troopers like golf balls. Arou and Woth jumped out of the tank. Just then, the tank exploded! Carathorn looked down the passage. The entire Sith crew-Barco Drey, Sluver, Alp Medredes and Captain Racun-blocked the only exit. Carathorn, Jeff, Ahoska and Garith whipped out their lightsabers and began to duel. But before much happened the entire supreme base exploded!
Tuesday, September 7, 2010
Chapter 10
Woth finished cracking the code on another door. It opened and the droid found himself with Arou, his good trooper sidekick, inside a room filled with broken pieces. He decided that this was the tank he was looking for! But he needed someone to build it. Then. without warning, the door rattled and flew open!
...
The main attack ship landed on the top of the supreme base. Jeff found a secret door and the team entered the base. They went down a passage and found a team of bad troopers. The Jedis and good troopers jumped into action and quickly defeated the bad troopers. Just then Commander Ben and the good troopers that been with him came down passage.
"The Jedi ship was completely empty. We took it up and parked it inside the main attack ship," Ben reported.
"Good work. Now we have an emergency ship," said Carathorn.
The team moved quickly through the passage and soon arrived at the room that Woth was in.
"As soon as I give the signal fling open the door, charge in and take the enemy by surprise," Jeff whispered.
The team silently did a quick weapon check and prepared for battle. Jeff gave the signal. Carathorn flung open the door. Good troopers poured into the room.
Woth and Arou were half finished with the tank when the door opened and hundreds of good troopers rushed into the room.
Arou turned to face the charging troopers as Jeff raised his gun. "Hold your fire!" Carathorn yelled as a look of confused recognition covered his face. "What are you doing?" he asked, his narrow eyes peering deep into Arou's stare.
Carathorn wasn't the only one who was confused by the idea of one of their own good troopers interfering with their mission. Jeff jumped in, "And I thought we could trust you."
"I can explain everything," Arou said, confidence exuding with every breath. "It's not what it seems."
...
The main attack ship landed on the top of the supreme base. Jeff found a secret door and the team entered the base. They went down a passage and found a team of bad troopers. The Jedis and good troopers jumped into action and quickly defeated the bad troopers. Just then Commander Ben and the good troopers that been with him came down passage.
"The Jedi ship was completely empty. We took it up and parked it inside the main attack ship," Ben reported.
"Good work. Now we have an emergency ship," said Carathorn.
The team moved quickly through the passage and soon arrived at the room that Woth was in.
"As soon as I give the signal fling open the door, charge in and take the enemy by surprise," Jeff whispered.
The team silently did a quick weapon check and prepared for battle. Jeff gave the signal. Carathorn flung open the door. Good troopers poured into the room.
Woth and Arou were half finished with the tank when the door opened and hundreds of good troopers rushed into the room.
Arou turned to face the charging troopers as Jeff raised his gun. "Hold your fire!" Carathorn yelled as a look of confused recognition covered his face. "What are you doing?" he asked, his narrow eyes peering deep into Arou's stare.
Carathorn wasn't the only one who was confused by the idea of one of their own good troopers interfering with their mission. Jeff jumped in, "And I thought we could trust you."
"I can explain everything," Arou said, confidence exuding with every breath. "It's not what it seems."
Chapter 9
Woth was an expert when it came flying Jedi Starfighters. He moved quickly through space, heading in the direction of the Bad guy's supreme base.
...
The main attack ship was cruising through space at exactly 101 miles per hour, which is it's normal speed. If needed, the ship could reach speeds of 145 mph. Then the supreme base came into view.
"Everybody to your battle stations! Prepare for action! Enemy base ahead!" yelled Carathorn.
Good troopers ran to the huge door of the main attack ship. Commander Ben began checking the ship's guns.
"All guns are battle ready, sir!" he said.
Bad guy ships zoomed out to fight them. Good troopers ships fired rapidly back.
...
Woth navigated swiftly toward the supreme base. His plan was to gain entry and then find the powerful tank located somewhere inside the supreme base. He landed without a sound on platform that led to one of the many entrances to the supreme base. Woth quietly went through the entrance and began to search for the tank. He found a door and began to work on cracking the code. A good trooper raced by. The trooper noticed Woth and stopped. The door opened. Woth had cracked the code! He hurried into a large room and saw a tunnel in the wall. The small droid flew into the tunnel. The good trooper followed him.
...
The main attack ship rushed toward the supreme base, destroying any enemy it came across. The colossal ship left hundreds of pieces of bad guy ships in it's wake.
"Sir, an unidentified Jedi ship has landed on the supreme base!" a good trooper reported to Carathorn.
"An unidentified Jedi ship? Commander Ben, as soon as we land take a few good troopers and inspect the ship. Everyone else, charge straight into the bad guy base and attack." Carathorn ordered.
...
The main attack ship was cruising through space at exactly 101 miles per hour, which is it's normal speed. If needed, the ship could reach speeds of 145 mph. Then the supreme base came into view.
"Everybody to your battle stations! Prepare for action! Enemy base ahead!" yelled Carathorn.
Good troopers ran to the huge door of the main attack ship. Commander Ben began checking the ship's guns.
"All guns are battle ready, sir!" he said.
Bad guy ships zoomed out to fight them. Good troopers ships fired rapidly back.
...
Woth navigated swiftly toward the supreme base. His plan was to gain entry and then find the powerful tank located somewhere inside the supreme base. He landed without a sound on platform that led to one of the many entrances to the supreme base. Woth quietly went through the entrance and began to search for the tank. He found a door and began to work on cracking the code. A good trooper raced by. The trooper noticed Woth and stopped. The door opened. Woth had cracked the code! He hurried into a large room and saw a tunnel in the wall. The small droid flew into the tunnel. The good trooper followed him.
...
The main attack ship rushed toward the supreme base, destroying any enemy it came across. The colossal ship left hundreds of pieces of bad guy ships in it's wake.
"Sir, an unidentified Jedi ship has landed on the supreme base!" a good trooper reported to Carathorn.
"An unidentified Jedi ship? Commander Ben, as soon as we land take a few good troopers and inspect the ship. Everyone else, charge straight into the bad guy base and attack." Carathorn ordered.
Monday, September 6, 2010
Chapter 8
Garith was awaked by a loud explosion. He jumped out of bed ad saw Jeff standing in the doorway of his room.
"Carathorn said that we should start preparing for the attack. That bomb was one a good trooper threw and lost control of," he said.
"So when exactly will the attack start? asked Garith.
"Carathorn said as soon as you were awake. So I guess that means now!" replied Jeff.
...
When the last good trooper boarded the main attack ship and the team prepared to take off, Ahoska noticed that one good trooper was missing.
"Did any of you guys notice that Commander Ben is missing? Isn't he supposed drive the ship? Oh, there he is," she said.
Commander Ben ran up to the main attack ship.
"My jetpack was broken. I just finished fixing it," he said.
Ben jumped into the driver's seat and pressed the launch button. The colassal ship roared to life and took off into space.
...
Far away on a frozen planet another ship roared to life. But this one was a normal Jedi Starfighter and contained only one small, brown astromech droid named Woth.
"Carathorn said that we should start preparing for the attack. That bomb was one a good trooper threw and lost control of," he said.
"So when exactly will the attack start? asked Garith.
"Carathorn said as soon as you were awake. So I guess that means now!" replied Jeff.
...
When the last good trooper boarded the main attack ship and the team prepared to take off, Ahoska noticed that one good trooper was missing.
"Did any of you guys notice that Commander Ben is missing? Isn't he supposed drive the ship? Oh, there he is," she said.
Commander Ben ran up to the main attack ship.
"My jetpack was broken. I just finished fixing it," he said.
Ben jumped into the driver's seat and pressed the launch button. The colassal ship roared to life and took off into space.
...
Far away on a frozen planet another ship roared to life. But this one was a normal Jedi Starfighter and contained only one small, brown astromech droid named Woth.
Saturday, September 4, 2010
Chapter 7
The team of Jedis sat at the table as Carathorn told them his plan. He had put maps into the Amazing Device and they were now displayed on screens surrounding the table.
"These maps show the location of the Supreme Base" Carathorn said. "We also have Barco Drey's plans. This lets us know the time the Base will be weakest. That is when we attack."
"Will we be using the main attack ship?" asked Jeff. The main attack ship was a colossal, heavily armed Jedi ship capable of destroying enemy ships 30 yards away with just four shots from its two enormous battle cannons located on either side. The ship had no wings, instead it had 27 rockets in the back. Ten rotating guns were on top of the colossal ship. A large weapon compartment held jetpacks, guns, and a few extra lightsabers.
"Yes" Carathorn said. "Me, Ahoska, Jeff, Garith, and 50 Good Troopers will take the main attack ship. Other good troopers will come in their own ships. Some of Chimau's laser troopers will help protect our base while were gone."
"When do we leave, Sir?" Garith asked.
"First thing in the morning. Get ready then get some sleep," Carathorn replied.
Garith and the other members of his team followed orders and immediately began inspecting their weapons. As they worked, he looked over at Jeff and asked, "Will we all come back?"
"If we are all committed to bringing everyone home, then we can do it. Just focus on your part and don't get distracted by anything else."
Garith put down his gun, satisfied that it was ready for battle. He picked up his light saber and began inspecting it. Satisfied that it, too, was battle ready, Garith attempted to get close his eyes and sleep, but his nerves were on edge and sleep was hard to do.
"These maps show the location of the Supreme Base" Carathorn said. "We also have Barco Drey's plans. This lets us know the time the Base will be weakest. That is when we attack."
"Will we be using the main attack ship?" asked Jeff. The main attack ship was a colossal, heavily armed Jedi ship capable of destroying enemy ships 30 yards away with just four shots from its two enormous battle cannons located on either side. The ship had no wings, instead it had 27 rockets in the back. Ten rotating guns were on top of the colossal ship. A large weapon compartment held jetpacks, guns, and a few extra lightsabers.
"Yes" Carathorn said. "Me, Ahoska, Jeff, Garith, and 50 Good Troopers will take the main attack ship. Other good troopers will come in their own ships. Some of Chimau's laser troopers will help protect our base while were gone."
"When do we leave, Sir?" Garith asked.
"First thing in the morning. Get ready then get some sleep," Carathorn replied.
Garith and the other members of his team followed orders and immediately began inspecting their weapons. As they worked, he looked over at Jeff and asked, "Will we all come back?"
"If we are all committed to bringing everyone home, then we can do it. Just focus on your part and don't get distracted by anything else."
Garith put down his gun, satisfied that it was ready for battle. He picked up his light saber and began inspecting it. Satisfied that it, too, was battle ready, Garith attempted to get close his eyes and sleep, but his nerves were on edge and sleep was hard to do.
Friday, September 3, 2010
Chapter 6
Suddenly, the wall to Garith's left exploded! Chimau's laser troopers came pouring in, racing through the room like a herd of mad bulls. Soon all the Troopers had passed and the room was quiet again. Then a good trooper's voice cut the silence.
"I've found the maps!"
Team C ran over to where the trooper was. Unluckily, all the maps were kept behind translucent laser door. Just then, the door to the room they were in flew open! Jeff turned around. Sluver, the evil General of the bad guys stood in the doorway. Sluver was half fish, half man. His fishy tail swished from side to side. He bared his enormous fangs at them. His two silver lightsabers turned on. Bad troopers poured into the small room. Jeff Fellog started to fight Sluver. Garith spotted another sith, Alp Medredes, mixed in the bad troopers. He immediately whipped into action! Swirling around like a tornado, Garith had bad troopers flying in every direction! Suddenly the young Jedi found himself directly in front of Alp Medredes! A deafening roar filled the room as General Grievous charged through the door! Garith began to wonder if this was the Supreme base. There were so many Siths in one place!
...
When Sluver, Grievous, and the bad troopers attacked the room that Team C was in they had left the walls of the bad guy base completely undefended. This made it extremely easy for Carathorn and Chimau to gain entrance to the base. Soon they were inside the base, searching for Team C. Then the Jedis and Good troopers reached the room that Team C was in. Carathorn and Chimau jumped on Sluver and drove him out the room. Ahoska charged General Grievous and began to fight him. As they fought they came close to a open window. Ahoska fell out the window! Grievous came flying out the window after her. Ahoska held her lightsaber up so the evil General would land on it. Thunk! Greivous cracked in two halves. His lightsabers buried into the ground.
"Can any of you help get this big dead robot off me?" said Ahoska.
Jeff climbed out the window and helped get Grievous off her. Then the entire Team took off. About ten minutes later they arrived at the Jedi base.
"I've found the maps!"
Team C ran over to where the trooper was. Unluckily, all the maps were kept behind translucent laser door. Just then, the door to the room they were in flew open! Jeff turned around. Sluver, the evil General of the bad guys stood in the doorway. Sluver was half fish, half man. His fishy tail swished from side to side. He bared his enormous fangs at them. His two silver lightsabers turned on. Bad troopers poured into the small room. Jeff Fellog started to fight Sluver. Garith spotted another sith, Alp Medredes, mixed in the bad troopers. He immediately whipped into action! Swirling around like a tornado, Garith had bad troopers flying in every direction! Suddenly the young Jedi found himself directly in front of Alp Medredes! A deafening roar filled the room as General Grievous charged through the door! Garith began to wonder if this was the Supreme base. There were so many Siths in one place!
...
When Sluver, Grievous, and the bad troopers attacked the room that Team C was in they had left the walls of the bad guy base completely undefended. This made it extremely easy for Carathorn and Chimau to gain entrance to the base. Soon they were inside the base, searching for Team C. Then the Jedis and Good troopers reached the room that Team C was in. Carathorn and Chimau jumped on Sluver and drove him out the room. Ahoska charged General Grievous and began to fight him. As they fought they came close to a open window. Ahoska fell out the window! Grievous came flying out the window after her. Ahoska held her lightsaber up so the evil General would land on it. Thunk! Greivous cracked in two halves. His lightsabers buried into the ground.
"Can any of you help get this big dead robot off me?" said Ahoska.
Jeff climbed out the window and helped get Grievous off her. Then the entire Team took off. About ten minutes later they arrived at the Jedi base.
Wednesday, August 25, 2010
Chapter 5
As Team C (That was Garith, Jeff and the troopers) approached the planet where the enemy base was located, they discussed their plan of attack. "This operations should be easy," Jeff said. "All we have to do is infiltrate the base and find the location of the Supreme Base." It was decided that during a follow up operation, they would use the weapon that was made from the Black Dust to wipe out the Bad Guy headquarters base.
As the enemy planet came into view, Jeff noticed one small problem in their plan. If it was to be an ambush, they couldn't just land in front of the enemy base. The bad guys probably had guards set and they would be alerted before the team could mount an attack. Jedi Fellog pointed this out to Carathorn over radio.
"I already have that figured out" said Carathorn. "Our forces will attack the base from both sides, distracting the enemy while you land quietly on the top, break the roof with your lightsabers and and fly down using the jetpacks. Then you will attack from the inside causing confusion among the bad guys"
When the battle began, Team C landed quietly on the top of the enemy base. Jeff and Garith began to hack away at the roof. Commander Fox, one of the Good troopers in Team C, had come up with brilliant and simple plan to disguise the team so they looked just like the roof to enemy ships flying above. The good troopers surrounded Jeff and Garith and held a piece of metal the exact size, shape and color of the top of the enemy base above their heads.
"We're almost through, Commander," Jeff said, his light sabers flailing violently on the enemy base. Less than a minute later the team was flying through a gaping hole, guns blazing. The Bad Troopers were caught completely off guard and had no strategy for defending their base from such an attack.
Jeff, Garith and the others capitalized on the chaos and made short work of the task at hand. "Commence room-to-room searches," Jeff commanded as the team finished off the last of the Bad Troopers. "We need to find the map to the Supreme Base. We can't win this war without knowing where the Big Bad Guy lives."
As the enemy planet came into view, Jeff noticed one small problem in their plan. If it was to be an ambush, they couldn't just land in front of the enemy base. The bad guys probably had guards set and they would be alerted before the team could mount an attack. Jedi Fellog pointed this out to Carathorn over radio.
"I already have that figured out" said Carathorn. "Our forces will attack the base from both sides, distracting the enemy while you land quietly on the top, break the roof with your lightsabers and and fly down using the jetpacks. Then you will attack from the inside causing confusion among the bad guys"
When the battle began, Team C landed quietly on the top of the enemy base. Jeff and Garith began to hack away at the roof. Commander Fox, one of the Good troopers in Team C, had come up with brilliant and simple plan to disguise the team so they looked just like the roof to enemy ships flying above. The good troopers surrounded Jeff and Garith and held a piece of metal the exact size, shape and color of the top of the enemy base above their heads.
"We're almost through, Commander," Jeff said, his light sabers flailing violently on the enemy base. Less than a minute later the team was flying through a gaping hole, guns blazing. The Bad Troopers were caught completely off guard and had no strategy for defending their base from such an attack.
Jeff, Garith and the others capitalized on the chaos and made short work of the task at hand. "Commence room-to-room searches," Jeff commanded as the team finished off the last of the Bad Troopers. "We need to find the map to the Supreme Base. We can't win this war without knowing where the Big Bad Guy lives."
Tuesday, August 24, 2010
Chapter 4

"We have successfully released the snakes and scorpions on the black dust," Garith said. They were inside the Jedi base.
"Good job. Everyone gather 'round the table and we will discuss are next move," Carathorn said. Around the table there were several screens revealing Carathorn's plan. Carathorn explained, "Half of our forces will attack the bad guy base from the front. The other half will ambush them from the back. But first we will intentionally leak false plans to the enemy side. I will ask Chimau, the queen of the forest to help us."
"Now I will suggest something else for the plan," Jeff Fellog said. " Me, Garith, and a small band of good troopers will approach the enemy base from the top. Then the we will be all over their base."
"Excellent suggestion, Jedi Fellog." Carathorn said. "This would be a good time to try out the Aerial Assault Packs." The Aerial Assault Packs were a new addition to the Jedi team. They were fully operational, battle-equipped jet packs capable of destroying enemy ships from up to a hundred yards. Because of their compact size, they were extremely maneuverable so they would be perfect for infiltrating any setting.
"We won't let you down, sir," Jeff Fellog assured his boss as the meeting broke up and the Jedis prepared for attack.
Sunday, August 22, 2010
Chapter 3
Garith flew over the dessert of Gafigan in his red and white striped two-man ship. The ten engines and storage compartment in the back added to the ship's size. When he reached Eastern Region, he noticed several figures moving on the black dust. Garith recognized a spider droid moving away from the main fight, distracted by something he could not see from his height. As he got closer, Garith recognized evil General Greivous. When he landed, Garith saw Jedi Master Ahoska, another team member that Garith rarely saw because she was often away exploring new places. A good trooper was distracting the spider droid, often turning around and firing a few shots at the droid. Garith turned to Ahoska and Grievous. Ahoska talked the entire time she fought. "You are seriously the worst fighter ever! This entire duel you haven't harmed me once, even though you have four lightsabers and I only have one!" She jumped over Grievous's thrust. "Take this! You don't know a single thing about lightsaber fighting!" At this point, Garith decided that Ahoska did not need help started to attack the spider droid.
As he turned to face the droid, his light saber flickered and then shut off leaving Garith unarmed and only feet away from the monstrous beast. "Dang batteries," Garith mumbled under his breath. "Next time I'm getting Duracell." Without a weapon, Garith was left with nothing but his hands and his brain. "How 'bout some help!" Garith shouted to the Good Trooper who was standing to his left. The Trooper sprang into action and tossed Garith his back up beam gun.
"Use this," the Trooper said. Garith caught the gun, aimed, and opened fire. His first shot hit the droid in the back leg causing it to stumble. The second shot took out his antennae, thus cutting off his communication. The final shot blew a hole in his head that was big enough to drive an X-Wing fighter through. As Garith turned around and headed back to his ship, he remembered the original reason he had come here. Garith got the snakes and scorpions and released them, then boarded his ship.
He was surprised to find Ahoska already sitting there. "I noticed you fighting that droid. Who are you?" she asked.
"I'm Garith. I've seen you a few times already" Garith said.
"Are you Yoda's son?" Ahoska asked.
"Yes" Garith replied. Just then the ship roared to life and lifted off. After only a few short minutes they arrived at the Jedi base.
As he turned to face the droid, his light saber flickered and then shut off leaving Garith unarmed and only feet away from the monstrous beast. "Dang batteries," Garith mumbled under his breath. "Next time I'm getting Duracell." Without a weapon, Garith was left with nothing but his hands and his brain. "How 'bout some help!" Garith shouted to the Good Trooper who was standing to his left. The Trooper sprang into action and tossed Garith his back up beam gun.
"Use this," the Trooper said. Garith caught the gun, aimed, and opened fire. His first shot hit the droid in the back leg causing it to stumble. The second shot took out his antennae, thus cutting off his communication. The final shot blew a hole in his head that was big enough to drive an X-Wing fighter through. As Garith turned around and headed back to his ship, he remembered the original reason he had come here. Garith got the snakes and scorpions and released them, then boarded his ship.
He was surprised to find Ahoska already sitting there. "I noticed you fighting that droid. Who are you?" she asked.
"I'm Garith. I've seen you a few times already" Garith said.
"Are you Yoda's son?" Ahoska asked.
"Yes" Garith replied. Just then the ship roared to life and lifted off. After only a few short minutes they arrived at the Jedi base.
Friday, August 20, 2010
Chapter 2

When Jeff and Garith got back, Carathorn examined the black dust. Then he put it into the Amazing Device, something Carathorn had invented long ago. Words appeared on the screen of the Amazing Device. They were:"About black dust. Black dust is found in eastern region of the dessert of Gafigan. It can be used many ways. When enough is put together, it can make large & powerful Tank that will be strong enough to destroy an entire army-"
"So that's why the bad guys are collecting so much black dust!" Jeff interrupted.
"We must cut off there supply of black dust immediately! said Carathorn.
The team of Jedis gathered around the large conference table deep inside the safety of the their base. Screens surrounding the table displayed images of various Bad Troopers and provided details of the black dust. A large map became visible behind Carathorn. His chair swiveled to the right as his laser pointer illuminated a section of the map. "This is our target," he announced. With the press of a button, the image on the map zoomed in to reveal a wooded path that connected the desert of Gafigan to the Bad Trooper base. "If we can block this path," Carathorn continued, "we will cut off thier supply lines.
"But won't they just build a new route?" Jeff Fellog asked.
"They could, but that is where phase two comes in to play." Carathorn looked over at Garith. "Your task is to make the supply of black dust inaccessible to the Bad Troopers."
"How will I do that?" young Garith wanted to know.
Carathorn clicked on the image on the screen and the wall revealed a picture of scorpions and snakes. "You will deposit this colony of pests into the black dust location. The scorpions and snakes will protect the supply from falling into the hands of the Bad Troopers forever."
Garith looked over at his mentor, Jeff. Jeff gave him a slight nod and the young Jedi knew that this would be his chance to prove himself as a Jedi. He could do this.
Thursday, August 19, 2010
Chapter 1
The forest was thick with vegetation as Jeff Fellog made his way closer to the Jedi base. Garith followed in his footsteps, careful to minimize any traces of the trail they were leaving in their wake. The Jedi bas had been in place for only a few months and the team had taken extreme measures to keep its location a secret.
Jeff and Garith made one final turn just past the mossy redwood. "Do you think we were followed?" Garith asked, unsure of his own ability to conceal his tracks.
"Only time will tell," Jeff replied. He was the older of the two travelers and an experienced Jedi Master. Jeff had trained along with Garith's father, Yoda back in the days when the Jedi base had been located in the dark swampy region of Garador. The reason they were in the forest was to collect the black dust of the bad troopers. One of the other team members, Jedi Master Carathorn, had discovered a small scouting team of bad troopers on the edge of the forest less than 24 hours ago. Jeff and Garith had secretly attacked the team of troopers and taken some of their black dust. Now the two Jedis were on their way back, being extremely careful not to give away the location of their base.
"Do you think Carathorn will be able to use the black dust to learn their secrets?" young Garith asked.
"That's his plan," Jeff Fellog replied ducking under a small branch. The ultimate goal of their mission had been to retrieve the black dust from the bad troopers so that their leader could analyze it and determine what they were made from. This would allow them to develop a weapon that could easily wipe out their entire enemy army.
Jeff and Garith made one final turn just past the mossy redwood. "Do you think we were followed?" Garith asked, unsure of his own ability to conceal his tracks.
"Only time will tell," Jeff replied. He was the older of the two travelers and an experienced Jedi Master. Jeff had trained along with Garith's father, Yoda back in the days when the Jedi base had been located in the dark swampy region of Garador. The reason they were in the forest was to collect the black dust of the bad troopers. One of the other team members, Jedi Master Carathorn, had discovered a small scouting team of bad troopers on the edge of the forest less than 24 hours ago. Jeff and Garith had secretly attacked the team of troopers and taken some of their black dust. Now the two Jedis were on their way back, being extremely careful not to give away the location of their base.
"Do you think Carathorn will be able to use the black dust to learn their secrets?" young Garith asked.
"That's his plan," Jeff Fellog replied ducking under a small branch. The ultimate goal of their mission had been to retrieve the black dust from the bad troopers so that their leader could analyze it and determine what they were made from. This would allow them to develop a weapon that could easily wipe out their entire enemy army.
Wednesday, August 18, 2010
Good guys and Bad guys
Good
Carathorn - Jedi Master
Garith - Jedi Knight (Yoda's Son)
Jeff Fellog - Jedi Master
Chimau - Queen of the Forest (has troopers with purple laser guns)
Ahoska - Jedi Master
Good Troopers
Bad
Barco Drey - Leader of all the Bad Guys
Sluver - General
Grievous - Other General
Alp Medredes - Sith Knight
Captain Racun - Captain
Bad Troopers
Problem
Good Guys and Bad Guys are fighting because the Bad Guys want to take over their galaxy. (Trandon)
Carathorn - Jedi Master
Garith - Jedi Knight (Yoda's Son)
Jeff Fellog - Jedi Master
Chimau - Queen of the Forest (has troopers with purple laser guns)
Ahoska - Jedi Master
Good Troopers
Bad
Barco Drey - Leader of all the Bad Guys
Sluver - General
Grievous - Other General
Alp Medredes - Sith Knight
Captain Racun - Captain
Bad Troopers
Problem
Good Guys and Bad Guys are fighting because the Bad Guys want to take over their galaxy. (Trandon)
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